Once I saw a penguin floating on the ice when we were on the boat. I said "hay, mum look there's a penguin" "No, It's a stick" . mum said '' jeez you don't believe me.? I cried and cried "Mum you have to believe your son !?" "No I don't" she said. I began to get angry. "You're getting me angry," I said, but then she gave me a fried fish. "I'm not angry anymore". I threw the fish and the penguin dived up to get it. "Now I believe you, I'm sorry " said Mum.
They lived happy ever after.
Interesting story. Good use of speech marks. Make sure the colours are easy to read.
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